Tomoya Okazaki

Tomoya Thu Jun 02, 2011 9:52 pm

[color=Black]S H I N I G A M I~Tomoya Okazaki

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: (Tomoya Okazaki)
Gender: (Male)
Age: (14)
Appearance: (About forehead length curlyish hair,with an big face and big body))

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality: (My Characher is an very non-fighting style person. He will fight if its ABSOLUTELY certain he has too. There are time's when he will want to spar,but thats very rare and dont expect it. He listens to the rules and is an all around good person.)

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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background: (His life on earth was very un-enjoyable. He has an pill-atic-abusive mother,and no father. He raised himself by himself mostly. With his mother coming into the picture every once and an while. He didnt like her almost at all,but he also had 4 sisters and 1 brother,and only 2 sisters of which he has met. He didnt get along with any of his siblings,he was more of an loner all his life.)

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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: (Toki Koutai)
Appearance: (His zanpakuto has an very elegant appearence,and it glistens in the sun like an steel blade of beauty)
Inner World: (The inner world of his zanpakuto is very strange,it has time holes in which you can get caught in and get changed to an different time frame,randomly. It's also very bright in his zanpakuto's world.)

Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : (It has an pink hilt with an slightly curved edge at the end,like an scimitar)

Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: (His zanpakuto has the ability to shine to blind the enemy or reverse time at the cost of his majority of reiatsu)

Release: (Shine to the heavens within in which eternal time exists)

Shikai Description: (His zanpakuto generally looks the same,with the difference of spikes along the blade,with an more curved edge,and the ability to seperate.)

Shikai Abilities: (My Shikai has the same abilities then it does when its not released,reverting time takes up much less reiatsu though..)

Bankai Description: (Prefer not to say)

Bankai Abilities: (Prefer not to say)

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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay Sample: (-I slide my hand to my side,slowly grasping my zanpakuto,i slowly unsheath it by 2-3 inches,letting the hilt itself,glisten in the sun,i look around,taking in my surroundings i sigh slightly,fully unsheating my zanpakuto,placing 2 hands on it,grasping it tightly i hold it out infront of me,ready to strike-)

Drake Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:35 pm

How so very short, too the point....but uhh...Mine is Better D:<!

Tomoya Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:38 pm

Drake wrote:How so very short, too the point....but uhh...Mine is Better D:<!

ur epic,so by default,urs is ownsome

Drake Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:39 pm

Tomoya wrote:
Drake wrote:How so very short, too the point....but uhh...Mine is Better D:<!
ur epic,so by default,urs is ownsome

Lol, Fucking xat won't let me get on chat...keeps lagging me the heck out..

Kojiro Makoto Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:41 pm

I Know Right? Xat On Drugs Right Now Lol..

Genya Arikado. Fri Jun 03, 2011 1:20 am

Kojiro Makoto wrote:I Know Right? Xat On Drugs Right Now Lol..

More like alcohol while it's having a heart attack. One goes in the other goes out.

**Sonomori Genocide** Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:47 am

[b][i][center]Verdict

Your character has failed the following
Detail- 3
Structure- 2
Character Depth- 1
Power Balance- 2

Reason for deny: You did not detail your abilities well enough, your history has to be at least 3 paragraphs, and you need to work on your RP sample a bit more. Overall, the application needs a lot more to it

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